I’ve received nearly a dozen resumes over the past six months that include gigantic summaries that are nearly identical. There must be a book somewhere that urges executives to fill their summaries to the brim with subjective assertions and along with it provides an example for people to copy.
What do you think?
I would like you to critically absorb this next paragraph and see how it strikes you. Is this summary effective? What in this summary can you be certain of? Ask yourself, is this summary an advocate or an adversary for this person?
Here goes:
“Competitive, pragmatic and responsive Sales & Marketing management executive with a proven track record of success. Creative & persistent problem-solver who thrives on challenges, excels under pressure and gets the job done. Bright, bottom-line oriented team builder who possesses outstanding interpersonal and excellent communication skills. Hands-on leader and catalyst, organized & thorough planner, and capable negotiator especially effective dealing with senior management. Accustomed to a fast pace & multiple projects while consistently maximizing business opportunities, relationships and profits.”
Well? Does this summary impress you? Do you want this person’s phone number so you can hire them before someone else steals them away? Or, have the assertions overwhelmed you to the point where you aren’t sure about any of the claims?
Now every assertion made in this summary may be true. There are a few people who are truly exceptional in every respect. However, it’s very rare and unfortunately most if not all of the capabilities cited here are based on individual perception.
One secret about assertions
The simple truth is, if you claim three great skills it’s more believable than when you claim 41 skills. The more you claim, the more suspicious it becomes. If you are absolutely determined to use subjective assertions, carefully weigh your skills and single out a few primary ones.
Doubt raises questions
As a critical reader I look at the summary above and question each assertion. First, is there evidence to support each assertion? Second, does this person have the expertise to accurately gauge their strength in all of these areas? Third, does it suggest insecurity or a lack of acuity?
When people make subjective assertions, it’s proper to question the voracity of their claims.
Evaluating the claims
Whenever faced with a resume full of subjective assertions I tend to become more critical. Note how the questions that result from this summary skew toward the skeptical:
Competitive:
• Are you a team player?
• Is it your way or the highway?
• Are you blindly competitive?
• Will you step over teammates to further your agenda?
Pragmatic:
• Are you capable of more complex solutions when needed?
Creative:
• Many people claim to be creative, but how does it show itself?
• Compared to artists, designers, etc, most business people just aren’t creative.
Persistent:
• Are you bullish and headstrong?
• Do you pound a single solution over and over until you get your way?
Problem solver:
• Do you solve problems on your own and not as part of a team?
• Do you work better by yourself than with others?
Bright:
• What’s your I.Q.?
• What degrees do you hold?
• Are they from elite institutions?
Bottom-line oriented & team builder: (Interesting combination)
• Can you quantify or qualify being bottom-line oriented?
• How do you know you build strong teams?
• What track-record do your teams have? Any metrics?
• What is the turn-over rate among your team? Has it improved?
• How many of your team members have been promoted?
Outstanding interpersonal and excellent communication skills:
• Yet another person claiming excellent communication skills.
• Have you received commendations or awards for your communication skills or did a few people tell you that you communicate well?
Hands-on leader:
• Do you micro-manage?
• Do you look over the shoulders of your staff and tell them how to do their job?
Catalyst:
• A “good” catalyst or a “bad” one? A catalyst for disaster?
• Are you a catalyst in the sense that you pressure people to work harder?
• Does being a catalyst mean you drive people around you crazy?
Organized & thorough planner:
• Do you have problems making timely decisions?
• Whenever quick decisions and execution are necessary are you a deer in the headlights because you have to thoroughly plan things out?
Consistently maximizing profits:
• Qualify or quantify how you maximize profits.
• You may tout a 7% increase in profits while competitors are achieving profit growth of 15%.
• Is there any evidence you maximize profits more than others?
Assertions affect the whole resume
Now that we have all these questions in our minds, we can go on and read the rest of the resume. Is this the frame of mind the writer would like the reader to be in? No, but it’s what this summary has created.
Be wary of unintended consequences. During an objective read-through, determine how first time readers might absorb the information. Be especially aware if you are trying to say too much. This resume is already being crushed by the weight of a summary that can’t possibly support all the assertions it makes.
Read the article How to write a strong summary to get helpful hints on how to write a powerful summary.